If you mean that you have not yet found the woman of your dreams here on POF, join the club.
Sorry to say, but if that is the case, do not despair.
Rant Im not an expert on profiles so prob not much help.
Couldnt find much wrong with yours beyond going on about writing a bit too much (but not a massive problem).
Plentyoffish dating forums are a place to meet singles and get dating advice or share dating experiences etc.